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On Broken Wings by ~Team-Rocket-4eva:iconTeam-Rocket-4eva:

Categories Manga/Anime > Digital Media > Fan Art

©2006-2009 ~Team-Rocket-4eva
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I know i haven't been around much, but i'm still drawing ... barely. Just a quick sketch that seemed to take forever to colour and i still don't like the result :shrug: Drawn because i seem to have a current obsession with the Alter Bridge song 'Broken Wings'.

A big sorry to all the people i've promised pics to, but i've finally got some time off work so i'll see what i can do this week :D

I'd appreciate some crit on this pic because i'm having real trouble seeing where i'm going wrong ... i just know i don't like it ^^;

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~AshuraSK Jul 15, 2006, 2:04:03 PM
Awesome! It's kind of hard for me to see on my computer screen, but as far as I can see it looks great! I like the wings. S/he looks like s/he's in pain...
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~Meowsa-chan11 Jul 15, 2006, 3:13:59 PM
wow. your getting really good, I love the shading and shadows, good work hun!

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:phae:= Girls with asses like mine, don't talk to guys with faces like yours ----> :kevin:
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~Mel-chan8 Jul 15, 2006, 7:53:52 PM
Ohhh! I love this! I'm glad to see your drawing again, I've missed seeing new stuff from you. The only thing I can see that might be wrong with it is the blood looks a little like velvet but it could just be my computer. I still really love it though!^_^ I think the hair is the best part. It's so detailed! Is this Ryou? Just wondered.
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~9xashesx6 Jul 16, 2006, 12:55:20 AM
Oh wow... great job. Please (sorry, not nagging... just encouraging :)) keep drawing! This is really good, the detail in the hair is great, the wings are great and the red shadow is a fantastic touch! :+fav: Really nice work

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Keep your head up, son ~
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~Daisaigai Jul 16, 2006, 5:59:21 AM
The only thing bothering me is the wings. The feathers look rough and spiky. Reminds me of Y. Mariks' hair. That could be considered an insult, so I'm sorry...otherwise, I like this. Very dark, very dreary. The lighting on the skin is flawless, too. Just be careful with that hand: It seems...rather displaced. I'd probably suggest making it more level with the legs.

If this doesn't help, I'm sorry... I like giving critiques, though. :)

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Please direct your attention to my new account, ~broken-day. Thank you! :)
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~Team-Rocket-4eva Jul 16, 2006, 8:18:48 AM
:nod: You are completely right :hug: Thanks for the constructive criticism it was helpfull :D
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~Team-Rocket-4eva Jul 16, 2006, 8:21:32 AM
Nagging is probably what i need! :XD: But thanks for the encouragement; i appreciate it :hug: I did spend ages on the hair so i'm glad you noticed the detail :glomp: Thanks for the fav!!!!
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~Team-Rocket-4eva Jul 16, 2006, 8:25:59 AM
Aww thanks hun! :glomp: You're right about the blood, i probably should have made it more splattered. Thanks for noticing the hair; it did take ages but i thought that was the best part too :hug:

:nod: Yep It's Ryou; i'm still obsessed :XD:
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~Team-Rocket-4eva Jul 16, 2006, 8:27:11 AM
Thank you! :hug: It's so nice to hear that you think i'm improving :D
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